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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

This was such a great, humourous one-shot, I really, really enjoyed it.

To be honest, I think you wrote Luna's character absolutely perfectly. I could absolutely, utterly picture Luna as I was reading it, walking down the street in that absent minded way of hers, wearing dirigible plums in her ears with gurdyroots shoved into her bag (that bit made me laugh, and seemed especially Luna-ish.)

I think you wrote Luna's personal voice really, really well, and the best part is that you didn't make her too ridiculous, which I think is a trap many fall into. I also love how you remembered so many bits from canon - such as the army of Heliopaths and Luna's comment to Harry about him becoming an Auror.

I also liked Mortimer, in a weird sort of way and is 'no-nonsense, no-weirdness' attitude. I wonder if he had OCD or something? Oh, and I think the ending, with Mortimer's yellow socks, was just perfect!

This was a really great one-shot, I enjoyed it!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi Courtney! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you were able to picture Luna like that and that you thought her voice and personality matched canon Luna. Those particular canon things that I added in there are some of my favourite Luna-isms from the books, I love the way she always stuck random thoughts about weird things into normal conversations with Harry so I figured she'd think about things like that in everyday life as well.

Haha, yes, I think Mortimer is a little OCD. I'm glad you liked his character though - you're right he has a very no-nonsense attitude, but can't adhere to it as much as he thinks he can. And I'm so happy you liked the ending too!

This was such a nice review! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing ♥

Kristin


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