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Review:patronus_charm says:
I blame NaNo (itís such a great excuse as itís a genuine one :P) for my lateness here :P

Bahaha Scorpius is just making me crack up! Itís just like old times with mini Draco, mini Harry (James) and then the whole are they friends or more thing going on with Erin and Albus just like Ron and Hermione. It just made me laugh so much. Iím not even minding too much that Scorpius is evil (massive Scorpius lover right here) as heís just so cute being his dadís mini me (yeah, massive Draco lover right here tooÖ) so I hope he appears more often.

Ooh a dance? I have a feeling another murder will occur here, I mean, with it being for a ghost and on Halloween it just seems too obvious. Or perhaps this is a ploy on your behalf to trick me into thinking there will be one. Hmmm, Iím not sure now. I really liked the developments on the Erin/Albus front though as they are quite cute together, and I canít wait to get to know more about the pair of them throughout the story.

I like the fact that James likes Potions, it just makes a bit of change because I usually have to put up with the whole I hate potions stuff in FF when I think it sounds like an awesome subject so it was great to find that here. The teacher seemed interesting too, I wonder what sheís really like because James seems to hold a certain amount of respect for her which is saying something for a boy that age as my brother didnít hold respect for many teachers at that age, so I canít wait to find out more.

I also liked seeing more people in Jamesí year because weíve had quite a narrow set of acquaintances so far. I wonder whether Jamesí popularity will change or not with the murders and having inside information. I hope so because he is a lovely person who deserves more friends I just hope theyíre not friends who only hang out with him for information.

Great chapter!

-Kiana

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