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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm here for a review tag!! (And because I like your story)

I like that Grace is going to try making friends. It should be interesting to watch her.

It's really heartening that Lily, Alice, and Marlene are so welcoming. That fills me with a ton of squee and happiness. I wonder how many people will ask why James never mentioned his sister before?

O.o that's quite a visual for Marlene and Sirius. I'm quite too literal to read something like that.

hehe, I love the teasing the girls do and that Lily called the guys pretentious for calling themselves the marauders.

aww, Snape trying to talk to Lily is cute but probably not going to get him anywhere.

My guess is that James is being presumptuous. :P

I couldn't imagine trying to be that close to someone with whom I had a strong, physical pull like that. Given their circumstances I think she's doing rather well.

Ooh, wow, magic without a wand. I am a bit disappointed that Prof Short wasn't given a heads up that she'd have special circumstances. Then again, I've never thought Hogwards has the best education program. Grace has some skill at dueling! I'm not at all surprised - it seems very fitting given what she's been doing with her life. Poor Snape though!

Remus and Grace's talk is too sweet. I think they're slowly making progress. It didn't sit well with me that he teased her about their connection but I am glad he offered to walk with her.

haha, I like that Remus is off to help her look for the handbook. :D So nice to have them go on an adventure.


Author's Response: Hello!

(And I'm glad that you like this despite its AU-ness)!

Grace will try to be on her best behavior so that she can try to make friends...sometimes :). I like to think that Lily, Alice, and Marlene (given they were remotely similar to the way I wrote them) would be (mostly) welcoming to the strange new girl.

O.o tehe! I'm sorry if I put some scary images in your head.

I thought that the girls could serve for some light and fluffy humor moments :).

And no, I'm pretty sure that Severus wont get very far while attempting to speak to Lily. Porr Severus :( (although he kind of did THAT to himself).

Oh, you guessed! I love that you guessed! Being presumptuous seems like something that James would do.

I wanted to have a character that I had a strong distaste for, so I decided that I would make that character the DADA teacher, as she wont be coming back next year :p. I believe that she would have been filled in to a certain extent, but that she wouldn't have paid very close attention to the special needs of a single student. Dumbledore seem to hire some odd DADA teachers in his time -_- (except for Remus, best teacher ever :p).

I think that Grace would be skilled at dueling and fighting since she's a demon slayer and whatnot. Severus will be alright, maybe not entire pleased with Grace, but physically alright.

I'm sorry you didn't like his teasing, it was meant to be friendly, I promise! In my head it was friendly, anyways :).

:D a mini-adventure!

Thanks for stopping by!

Oh! Currently on episode 9...young David Boreanaz? :D yay!


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