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Review:toomanycurls says:
Of course Lily is upset he said yes. She just don't know what's good for her. :P

until the hipogriffs come home?! That's excellent!!

Alison asking if assuming that Lily would have maimed her was funny and really put a bit of reality on how adamantly she hates James. At least Clara can vouch for his abilities as a tutor.

I lose my bag under the chair/bench all the time!!

Ugh, I hope Lily can swallow a bit of her pride and be civil. *grumpy face* Though, I don't blame her for guessing there's an ulterior motive there.

Ahh, I feel like I'm watching their first real person to person interaction. It's kind of sweet. haha! Of course James called Lily on her unspoken assumption. I just want to hug someone after their little scene together. James' grin and Lily being flustered makes me so full of squee.

Poor Luce with her Sirius crush. ha! A lot of things would be more interesting with Sirius disrobed. *ahem*

It's so sweet that Luce is tutoring Peter. I love the idea of students helping one another out like that. I mean, in the books it didn't seem like that was going on despite people having clear strengths in certain fields. I quite like that it happened here!

Of course you ended it with Lily leaving for the tutoring session. Right when things are about to get interesting. I can't wait to read on!!

Author's Response: Hello again :) thanks for another great review!

Ha, she does not know what's good for we, does she? Silly Lily!! She'll learn though, and more than just Transfiguration ;)

I'm glad you liked that little tweak to 'till the cows came home' I thought it'd make it more wizardly :)

Lily has a little bit of a temper (usually brought on by Potter), but her friends like to exaggerate it and like to tease her, hence the comment about maiming Lucinda. I'm glad you found it amusing :)

I'm always doing that too, and at the most inappropriate times!

Lily will become more civil, in her defence she has been thrown into something she wasn't keen on and is stressed about her exams. She'll get her manners and friendliness back soon though ;)

:D I'm glad that little scene with James and Lily made you full of squee! There should be some more squee inducing moments throughout this (at least I hope they induce some squee!)

Haha! I totally agree that a lot of things would be more interesting with Sirius disrobed ;) Poor Luce, indeed, she really does have it bad!

I'm glad you liked the idea of students helping each other, it's the basis of a few relationships/friendships in this fic :)

Ha, sorry about leaving it there! The first tutoring session should be up soon :) I'm so happy you can't wait to read on!

Thanks again for the lovely review
Haronione ♥


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