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I loved the plot idea of the story. We all know about the dreadful night, but we are ever curious about James and Lily's life in Godrics Hollow. I think you've captured their love for each other, their loneliness, helplessness and also their role as Harry's parents. It was all very realistic.

Voldemort's entry gave me the chills. The way you described the changes of the atmosphere of the room was very effective.

Great job!
Ashwini

Author's Response: Awww thanks! This was actually quite a challenge for me as it meant stepping out of my comfort zone. I was really going for the emotional aspect of this horrible event and it's good to see that some of that came through!

Laura


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