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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello there! I felt like reading some random stories today so here I am. Yay! Ok, so I really liked this. There isn't enough fanfiction out there about Gideon and Fabian, so this was really refreshing and original. Also, I don't know if it's ever mentioned in canon or not but I LOVE when they're written as twins! The way they think on the same wavelength, their "For Molly/the order/everyone else" spiel (which I loved) that they do together, it was so great.

I think the best part of this is Gideon's sense of humour as he goes into battle against Death Eaters. He's confident and fighting for a cause, and I really liked the way you wrote him. And actually, it reminded me a lot of Fred making jokes at Percy's expense in DH just before he was killed. In a way that made it even sadder because as I was reading Fabian and Gideon fighting in the first wizarding war, it almost felt like I was reading about Fred in the second war, so all the feels came back. Gah!

You did really well interspersing the action with Gideon's thoughts too, it flowed well and wasn't just a long string of hexes/curses, the way Gideon is thinking about all these people in his life as he and his brother fight their last battle. All in all this was a great one shot! Nice job! :)

Author's Response: Hey there!

Haha, I know what you mean :) I love scrounging around and finding new fics to read - I especially love one shots!

I'm super pumped that you enjoyed this. Fabian and Gideon are definitely not done enough. When I got Gideon for the challenge, I was just a newbie into fanfiction. I had no clue how to do it, but with a little bit here and there, I managed to get something down.

I love them as twins too! I've only ever read one novel which starred them, and in it they were both twins, and I really liked the idea. It's become my head canon now, too!

I've really never thought of it that way, but now that you mention it, I can see how this is similar to that of Fred's death. Now I feel even more cruel, lol!

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review, it seriously means so much! :)

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