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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I think you write scary amazingly! And it's definitely not an easy thing to do, either. The last scene was perfect chilling. I think my heart actually began to pound a little faster than usual! The way you described that bare room and then the diary on the floor...I could just feel the fear and horror radiating from Ginny.

I'm not yet sure what to make of Bree. She seemed really nice, but I swear there was something off about her. Or maybe that's just me coming to quick conclusions. But I don't know, it just felt like there was something weird about the whole situation, like Ginny was comfortable too quickly. And then Ginny's reaction when Bree told her to keep the journal...

I don't know, maybe I'm overthinking things here.

Anyway, great chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thank you! I like that scene because I think it's the first time Ginny can't just pretend like she didn't see what she clearly saw. That's why she really unraveled there. I'm very pleased that the scary was effective :)

I'm still kind of figuring Bree out, to be honest. I think she means well but it's hard for her to be impartial when a celebrity is sitting across from her in a session; I think it would be unrealistic to assume that wouldn't be challenging for a therapist. Ginny, meanwhile, I think is treating the session like something she can check off her list and her life will automatically get better. Trust me, she is definitely not comfortable in the situation, and the more people prod at her the less comfortable she'll get.

Thanks for your sweet review!

-Amanda


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