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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

Okay, so I just couldn't resist coming by and reading a little bit more of this amazing story! I am so incredibly jealous of your writing style. It flows so nicely and is so easy to read without being the whole basic dialogue only thing )if you know what I mean) and it just feels so professional! So yeah, I definitely envy you!

I really liked the way you portrayed both Ron and Hermione, and Harry. From what I could tell in the brief snippet we saw this chapter, it seems like Harry and Ginny still have a great relationship - although I guess looks can be deceiving. Also, I'm not sure about Ginny, but if I was her I would get a little frustrated seeing my husband go off to work while I was stuck at home.

I love how you haven't forgotten the war, forgotten all the people these character's have lost and all the hard times they have been through - I think a lot of authors do tend to forget about these moments, and it seems like Ron, Harry, Hermione and Ginny lead all too happy lives. But I still found it very sad that Hermione is still having nightmares.

I love what you've shown us so far of the relationship between Ginny and Hermione - it seems just like I've imagined1

Now, before this runs the risk of becoming waffly (which it has probably already done, but that's okay) I think I'll just go ahead and read the next chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey Courtney! Wow, you're going to make me blush. Thanks so much for stopping by!

I think Harry and Ginny have a happy marriage, but you're right that Ginny is feeling a little strained about having to stay home instead of being able to go out and play Quidditch and generally enjoy her freedom. Only time will tell if she'll actually transition to being angry at Harry for not having the same expectations.

Writing the post-war trauma here was a central reason for starting the story. Trauma is interesting and depressing and poetic, and I wanted to really dive in and explore it because, sadly, I haven't gotten much of a chance to study it in real life.

Thanks for another awesome review :)

-Amanda


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