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Review:LoonyLovegood11 says:
As someone who has dealt with abuse and wants to work with abuse cases somehow, I'm not sure I completely like this story. It breaks my heart, I don't think I want to know how you put in all this raw emotion but I flipping hope its made up.
The writing is good there is no denying that I just don't see how some people are just oblivious to what is going on. I think of myself as a perceptive person, its just obscure to me.

Anyway I do love the characters, they have so much depth. Clara's back story is very thought out and reflects in her actions. I can't wait to learn more about them and their individual stories.

I'm a big believer in the every action has a reaction concept, and that there is a reason why people act the way they do. It works with everything not just the bad stuff.
Someone once told me that life is 10% what happens and 90% how you react to it and I think your story displays that nicely.

Like I said in the beginning I'm not sure how much I like this story (purely on concepts and values) but I am sure as hell going to keep reading.
You've got me hooked, congrats :)
Update soon xx

Author's Response: Hi! First off, thanks so much for taking the time to review my story :)

I am so sorry for everything that you have gone through, but I admire you so much for wanting to dedicate your life to helping others. I won't say where I draw the emotion from, just as a privacy issue.

The oblivion of the world is...sort of a parallel to what I see in America today! Don't worry though, I promise everything will become more developed.

And you complimenting Clara is the biggest compliment to me! I put so much into her and I'm glad she's connecting with the readers.

That is an amazing quote, by the way, I'm totally going to start using it! Sorry if my story brings up memories for you, but I just want to say again thanks so much for reading and reviewing and this story is not all bad I promise!

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