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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello! marauderfan here with your requested review. (By the way, I like your "feed the author" zoo tour guide spiel at the end of the chapter there haha.)

So, it wasn't an eventful chapter, but it's a very important transition. I think to this point Ana has been taking Draco for granted, and now she'll be forced not to. I'm so curious to see how she interacts with Harry as her new guardian! There's definitely a lot about to change and I think you set that up well. And as always I like the banter between Ana and Draco!

Also, cue the "Awww"s. :D I thought it was really cute that Draco waited there for three days, and that neither of them wants to admit there's something there. The scene with Gawain was great too - he can understand Draco better than Draco understands himself ;)

Oh and I'm so curious about what those animals were! Does Ana even know what they were? Something that clearly isn't well known to the rest of the wizarding world - I thought it was interesting how she kept it secret from even the Healer.

Uh so... I've got nothing useful to say, just a bunch of gushing and predicting, haha. I think I'm a little too attached to the story now to be able to give valuable CC, unless you have specific areas of concern! :p Anyway, I am really excited to keep reading and find out what happens next. Great chapter!!

Kristin

Author's Response: Haha thanks for the review and the kind words :)

Ana has no idea what those things were! They aren't something found in any wizard in textbook, I can tell you that right now ;) I'm very excited to put out the chapter that has everything tying together! But not until after NaNo :(

I hope you read on some more! And it's okay that you've grown attached to the story that is also valuable CC. I wanna know what I'm doing right as well. Thank you again for dropping by :)

--Mon


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