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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oh my goodness, Snape just almost completely quoted the letter to Lily in this chapter! My 'Oh my, something isn't right about this' senses were on high alert, and I think I'm just going to have to finish this story right now to find out everything! Right now it seems like Snape was the one who sent the letter, but that could just be me coming to hasty conclusions, maybe it's someone else entirely!

But who...

I feel like a couple of DUN, DUN, DUNS! are necessary here.

Anyway, I really liked the different perspectives to this chapter. It was definitely nice to hear from Remus, as he so often seems to be abandoned in marauders fanfics, just like Peter, and I love Remus to pieces! I enjoyed his conversation with Lily, too, you really made her personality stand out!

Already looking forward to the next chapter!


Author's Response: You caught that -- good for you! Yes, it's important! It does make me feel good that so many people let that clue slip by unnoticed, but it also makes me feel good to know someone saw it. I'm not (as) crazy!

I love the Marauders era -- it's one of my favorites to write -- so your compliments are very kind to me. Thank you for reviewing!

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