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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello there, I'm here from Hufflepuff review tag!!

Ok, so I have a small confession to make - I am not the biggest fan of Draco/Hermione in general. But, I think parallel universes are AWESOME. Basically, I love the idea of a parallel universe Dramione. You might have convinced me! :p

I think it starts out well. The interactions between the trio are well done. Especially Hermione being so eager and flustered over her first meeting as Head Girl that she got the date wrong and went early. It seems like the sort of mistake she would make!

I did wonder why Snape was Headmaster though. This first chapter isn't the parallel universe yet, so I was curious how he was alive, but perhaps that's something that gets explained later?

I'm curious about the time turner too - why it was there on the bench, and what happened to it to make it do that. Great cliff hanger to start off your story!

You've got a nice start, and such a great idea for your story! There are so many exciting places you can take this story - how things would have been different had people made other choices. I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do with it. Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! You're 100% right, Snape is not supposed to be in the first chapter - that was a huge oversight and I'm just waiting on my revised chapter to be validated so that can be fixed! Draco is actually standing in front of Snape's memorial statue (in case you were wondering lol). It makes me happy to hear that you feel I portrayed Hermione well!

I'm glad you like my story idea - the idea of a parallel universe has always fascinated me!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing :)


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