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Review:Ardeith says:
I'm still reading and reviewing! I know I keep disappearing and this time it's 'cause my grandmother passed away. She'd been sick and was slipping away but we still miss her... :-(

So glad to see Beth and Sirius back on good terms. She definitely needs his support in her life now. I loved his weak excuses -- for someone so inventive (he's a Marauder after all!), they were pretty lame. Not criticizing at all, it seems right...just not sure why.

Your writing gets better and better, I can always really feel your weather (if that makes sense). I liked this:

"The smell of asphalt was thick in the air, dredged up from the late spring sun, and the windows of the buildings reflected the glare, winking like eyes behind glasses."

And your descriptions of feelings! I liked this, too:

"hen her eyes found Siriusís. It was as though a thin film of ice immediately coated them, angry fire burning brightly beneath. "

Hope you don't mind that I'm slowly working my way through your story! I hope to catch up...eventually, because I see you're working on a new one! :-)

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