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Review:FawkesFelicis says:
I like this chapter a lot, I can tell that you did your research on living death eaters, and I admire that. The scenes of home life are so cozy, it really seems like the kind of family gatherings that JKR wrote. The one thing I might recommend just for this chapter (and I know you are far beyond this part of the story now) is more even spacing of events. A couple things felt rushed, because there was a lot to say in this chapter. It would have been awesome if you had expanded on some of those thoughts.

Again, excellent!

-FawkesFelicis

Author's Response: Thank you!
Haha, I had to re-read that final battle scene a dozen times to make sure I didn't include any dead Death Eaters as I want this story to be Canon-friendly.

Okay, I'll be sure to check your note out ASAP. Let me know if there was anything in particular you thought could've used some expanding. I think I know which part (Teddy's scene?) but I like to be sure.

Thank you so much for the reviews, I really do appreciate the feedback!
:)


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