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Review:maraudertimes says:
I really liked this one! So much butt-kicking Ginny! :)

There was only one mistake that really stood out to me, though: "... our return students..." I think it should be 'returning'?

Other than that, really top-notch. Absolutely amazing! The fact that you incorporated the uncontrollable magic when the characters were younger really brought the great Queen's version (and shall I say true account of the story) into yours and made it feel like a veritable part of the HP universe, and not so much a fic.

The fact that Ginny didn't know what a microwave was (and called it a micron-waver) really spoke to her pureblooded-ness, even if she tries to distance herself from it, but I thought the hilarity of the situation of the Creevey's and Lillian joking about blowing stuff up in them balanced that out in the sense that sure Ginny might be a pureblood, but her friends are full blown muggleborns who blow things up in microwaves!

Question for you, the author though: have you ever blown something up in a microwave? ;)

Okay, last thing. I really loved this part: "Half an hour later, when the two apparently love-struck prefects were done snogging each other's brains out..." I don't know, it just made me crack up!

So, all in all, amazing job. Kudos to you!!! Please update soon, won't you? And feel free to request this story in my review thread once you do update it. I would love it if you did that :)

Lo :)

Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm glad you liked it, I've been working pretty hard on it.

Thank you! I hadn't caught that. I've got a chapter in the queue, but once it passes and the wait time is a little shorter, I'll update.

I have only exploded hot dogs in the microwave. Lol. +] I was one of those responsible children trying to make sure all the little siblings didn't blow things up in the microwave.

I would love for you to continue reviewing! I've got 7 pages of the next chapter written, about 3000 words, and still haven't addressed the main conflict of the chapter (OOPS!) but my alpha beta reader (the wonderful hubby) says that everything has a point and a place, and it doesn't really drag, so I'm planning on keeping all the content. I'll be sure to ask you to watch out for that when I request the review, just to make sure the story doesn't start to drag.

Thanks for the review, and I'll be leaving you some feedback on the second chapter of animal in the morning. (It's getting pretty late here.) +]


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