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Review:toomanycurls says:
I feel so ashamed. I read this last month and got through quite a few chapters without reviewing. :( In my defense, I was reading it on my phone (bit o' bed time reading). I saw your post the other day about not getting comments but getting reads and I felt a bit bad.

On with my review!!

Poor Alexandra. :( I understand being hurt after a breakup but I hope she perks up soon. aw man, I've had the same thing where happy memories are harder after a break-up than the sad ones.

I laughed so hard after Charlie and Alexandra got dressed. Their comments about not looking cheap was hysterical.

Your scene with the party and Sirius (I'm guessing it's him even if Alexandra can't tell) is quite romantic/lusty. I keep re-reading that part. Ah, how could she leave that moment? I'd *die* for that moment.

As much as I don't like Amos right now, I am so happy he laid off despite the provocation. ^_^

I love how well you captured teenage/young feelings and situations. I got so caught up in the action and drama. .


Author's Response: Aw! I didn't mean to make you feel bad! I actually do that all the time and then I feel so horrible myself, so don't you dare feel guilty!!!

But yay! you read it!

And I'm glad you found the breakup relatable considering I had to base that off of books and movies... My love life is unsurprisingly dead. But yay for laughs while getting dressed!

And yes, it is Sirius :P, and I KNOW! I would probably *faint* if I was in that situation. And I *definitely* wouldn't leave!

And yes, I know about the Amos situation of 'do-I-hate-him-or-not.' But, I had to show he was a good guy, because otherwise, why would Lexi be his girlfriend?

And I think the capture of teenage feelings may come from me (I'm one myself), although the situations I'm pleasantly surprised about considering my social life is about as dead as my love life.

"But that's okay!" I whisper to myself in my dark bedroom. "You have fanfiction. Fanfiction and cake..."

o.0 I don't know what that was. But thank you! I really appreciate this and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!


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