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Review:AlexFan says:
Wow, Crooked Larry does not like sound a fun cat. If I were Lily I wouldn't offer to look after Rose's cat even if she is family. But it was pretty funny watching Lily deal with the cat though.

I found her particular reaction to Crooked Larry being on her bed funny. Although if I was in her place I would've probably done the same thing.

And wowie, Marco sounds very attractive but by the sounds of it, no matter how attractive he is Lily won't have any problem resisting him at all. She clearly isn't going to be warming up to him any soon but all the same, I look forward to his interactions with Lily as they'll probably be quite amusing.

And I love how blunt Lily's boss is, she doesn't even bother beating around the bush about Lily's last name was a boost for the sales and I like that.

Really interesting chapter and I look forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Haha he is certainly not. Lily will definitely not be volunteering for it again!

Their interactions should be interesting--at least for me to write, and hopefully for you to read as well!

Thanks so much for this! I'm participating in Nanowrimo this year so it may be a little bit before this is updated, but I hope to get chapter 3 up soon :)

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