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Review:maraudertimes says:
Okay okay, before I get to the squealing, there are some things I need to address.

"...looked down at the puny morts..." Do you mean to say mortals?

"'...anything that you've built,' or have built she added to herself." That sounds a little bit redundant...

Okay, squealing time.

This was so cute. Poor Heffy! Stupid Ares! I both in love and in hate with Aphrodite right now. But yay for meddling with George and Angelina!!!

I really loved how you did this kind of crossover thing. It really works and it was SUPER good!

*insert more squeals*

Also, your banner! Is that ScarJo? If so, OMG she's perfect for Aphrodite!

Anyways, I really loved this! Like a lot. Just... Gah! Feelings! Great job!


Author's Response: Those things you pointed out, I noticed them as well and I had the biggest facepalm in the history of facepalms because they're such stupid mistakes. This is why I'm getting a beta for this story so they can spot what I miss.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it at least. I can see that you've already picked which god you ship Aphrodite with.

I wanted to write a George/Angelina story but I didn't know how to make it work and then I saw this banner and it clicked and this was born.

I'm not entirely sure, I'm looking through gallery photos of her right now but I haven't found anything (if it is then that is one creative photoshoot).

I can't stop giggling because I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

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