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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm sure you've figured out by now that I lurve Lupin. I'm quite excited to read your parody with him in it. :D

I could totally see Lupin questioning his mother's choice of name. I got a good laugh out of that. I'm quite interested in the Voice.

What?! Lupin making friends with *that* lot. Well, good thing the Voice guided him the right way. Wow, the voice is quite pushy, isn't it? It is quite funny though.

A Slytherin conga line? Aw man, I had such visuals. Yeah, James being HB has always seemed a little suspicious to me. :D Is Narcissa your Bella what's her face from Twilight? Awesome!! She sounds clumsy enough! You're killing me here! seductively clumsy is the best line I've read in a long time.

Lucius as a vampire is awesome! I can't quite comment on everything but I'm laughing quite hard reading this. Narcissa sounds so incoherant - well done there!

The Voice mentioning Tonks when telling Remus that Narcissa isn't for him is a perfect and hysterical tie-in to the Twilight series.

Bravo doing a great parody. I laughed so hard doing this. You picked the characters and situations perfectly!!
-Rose

Author's Response: Hello! Haha I'm really glad you picked this story to read and review because of our mutual love for him. I haven't gotten many reviews on this as you can see so it's great to re-visit it... I chuckled a little to myself while reading this review. :P

I love JKR's use of significant names but I feel like the characters themselves, if they looked at them critically, would be quite puzzled, so it was fun making fun of that.

I'm glad you enjoy the Voice, I was quite amused while coming up with it. And yes, it is very pushy.

Haha I basically just used this story to poke fun at everything I could think of that is vaguely strange in the HP books and conventional in certain vampire romances. I quite enjoy making fun of Twilight hehe so I'm glad you liked it and Lucius the vampire.

The Tonks bit just fit so perfectly into the whole weird Renesmee/Jacob Twilight thing that I couldn't resist.

Thanks so much for this awesome review, and I'm so glad you liked it! :D


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