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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm back! And I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed my last review which was full of gushing and nothing else.

First of all, let me just say, Sam and Victire. We need to come up with a ship name for them. Maybe Sictoire or Vam. Seriously though, those two are so cute together and I love how they get along so well and just click with each other.

And I also like how you didn't make Victoire this stuck up person who thinks she's better than everyone like in most fanfiction. I actually really like this version of Victoire, she's relatable and she's got more depth to her than any other Victoire that I've ever read and I applaud you on that.

I also love your descriptions of Paris, it felt like I was actually there and now I actually want to go to Paris even more than before.

Gabrielle sounds like buckets of fun, I wouldn't mind hanging around her while in Paris. And goodness, I never imagined her getting together with Charlie but hey, it doesn't matter to me.

But yeah, let's have lots of Sam and Victoire in this story! And just out of curiosity, will Victoire ever tell Sam that she's a witch or will it just stay a secret for this entire story?

Author's Response: Hi again! Hey, I'm definitely not complaining about the gushing. I'm so happy you came back because this is the first review I've gotten on this chapter and I loved writing it, so getting some feedback really means a lot. :)

Your shipping of Sam and Victoire is awesome. I like Vam personally, it really has a nice ring to it. I think you're right, I've written so many complicated relationships in other stories and these two are just comfortable and happy around each other, and that dynamic is a lot of fun.

I'm also really happy you like my Victoire here, and think she's original! I think evil Barbie Vic is a great antagonist in some stories, but she wouldn't make a very interesting protaganist, and I also think that being raised by Bill and Fleur and being the eldest of the clan there wouldn't be much time for being too self-centered.

Yay, I'm so happy I got a bit of the feeling of Paris across! It's a lovely city and I would definitely recommend going there (Victoire would too, in fact!). Something I really want to get across in this story is the feel of certain locations and cities and really re-create them here.

I loved writing Gabrielle, she really is crazy here but I love it. I thought a mention of a Charlie/Gabrielle moment would be silly and quite uncomfortable for Victoire, though I'm not sure if it would go any farther. :P

Hmm, good question! I guess you'll have to wait for the next chapters to find out... though I would actually have to write them soon... hmmm.

Thanks so much again for this awesome review and for supporting this story! :D It really made my day and I greatly appreciate your feedback!


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