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Review:AlexFan says:
Oh my gosh James is so terribly innocent it's adorable! James is just in general incredibly adorable. Lily is very innocent as well which is another thing that makes her perfect for James.

But seriously though, their banter is just so light-hearted and it flows really well between them. I love the dialogue that you've got going on here and the growing relationship of James and Lily.

And my favourite part was definitely the part where he asked Lily if she was his girlfriend and then started going on about how he didn't want to pressure or anything. Nervous James is just so gosh darn adorable.

I apologise in advance for all of the gushing that's going to be in future reviews but as you can probably already tell, Jily is my OTP and you're just making me ship them even more than I already do.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this chapter so much - I definitely wanted to portray James that way. :)

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