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Review:AlexFan says:
I remember that I read this a long time ago and I was so excited when I read it but then I kind of lost hope of it ever being updated but then it was so everything is okay. I decided to reread this from the beginning, dropping reviews as I go so here I am!

This was so incredibly cute! Gah, I will never ship anything as much as I ship Jily. The fluff in this was killing me! I love how Lily Evans, one of the smartest witches at Hogwarts forgot that she could summon an umbrella. It's not something that you think would happen to Lily but she's human just like the rest of us and prone to moments of dimness.

And then along came James, her knight with an umbrella! And good for Lily for asking James out to Hogsmeade. It doesn't always have to be the guy to ask the girl out and I'm glad that Lily stepped up and asked James. Now that takes courage.

And then of course James just had to slide his hand lower to see how far he could push it before Lily stopped him. And the banter between those two was just so adorable and I love how nervous James is about touching Lily even if it is innocently!

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry! RL has definitely gotten in the way of my writing lately, but I'm going to try to get better about that.

Thank you so much for the lovely review, and I'm sorry my response is so late. :(

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