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Review:AlexFan says:
The ending was my favourite part about all of this. It just pulled at my heart strings and made me smile in happiness but also a little bit sad.

To think that everyone Harry loved was there and had heard everything but he couldn't see them.

I've never seen a one-shot about Harry visiting his parents, Remus, Tonks and Sirius. I can definitely see that he would want to have a funeral for Sirius.

I love the simplicity of this one-shot. The simple dialogue that's easy to read and the dialogue. It sounds like Harry visits the grave every year and catches everyone up on what's going on in his life so that they don't feel like they're missing out on anything.

But the end is definitely my favourite part of this one-shot. Awesome job on this!

Author's Response: Hey! I am awfully sorry for this extremely late reply, have been caught up in RL... but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked the ending... it was bittersweet and I am pleased you got that.

Yeah, it's a bit sad ain't it?

I am glad you've never come across such a one-shot, so I'll take that as a compliment xP I always felt that Harry saw Sirius as a very close friend and a father-figure so he'd want to have something to remember him by.

I was afraid it was a little too short and simple but your words put me at ease. I am pleased it all fit in for you.

Thank you for your lovely review!


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