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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hi!! I'm still stalking your story.

After your last review response I felt like a dork for not doing the math on Grace being James' twin and the year you gave... I don't do my best thinking with a cold.

I LOVE how you describe the wolf in Remus. I touch on it a bit in How I Killed my Lover but you take it to a whole new awesome level here. I've read a lot of stories about the wolf finding a mate and the human side needing to go with it. I like how you parse that out here.

I'm *really* enjoying her demon hunter side. Kind of Buffy the Vampire Slayer but she's a witch so it's that much cooler.

Lily meeting Grace was quite wonderful. Lily is so nice and almost sounds angelic.

The way Grace swears is quite awesome. I'm a fan of swearing and she does it well (as if she does it a lot). I can't stand it in other fics where people sound like they're putting in the M-rated swear words just to try them out. Though, what the heck is she going through in the bathroom?

I love the way you write Albus. He's not too far out but he's still quite wise and all-knowing. I'm quite intrigued to see if Grace picks a different house. Grace's description of meeting Remus sounded quite intense. I really feel bad for her meeting someone she's in love with but knowing he won't feel the same way about her. I'm quite amazed by the way Albus talks to Grace as a peer - it makes sense given her unique position.

I quite like that Grace wanted to make ammends with Remus but I agree that it's a bit off par to want to earase his memory of her trying to tell him everything in one go. I can see why she'd be used to it in her work but it's still a bit shocking to think about.

I got a good laugh about Grace thinking Snape's name is Snivellous. Hilarious! Does Grace have terrets or is she a proliphic swearer? Just wondering after her comment about not being able to control her swearing at times. I'm quite intrigued by her interestin Snape - especially because she didn't know it was him right of.

Amazing chapter!


Author's Response: Hello!

It's okay, stalk away! ;)

The age was meant to be in there, nobody should have to be subjected to mathematics in order to get basic information from my story!

The idea of werewolves in the HP world always intrigued me. I think one of the main reasons was that it was quite malleable with the given information on the subject.

I've heard somebody else reference Buffy the Vampire Slayer in regards to Grace being a demon slayer. I'm going to have to check that out. Perhaps it will give me some pointers as I assume there will be vampire killing :p.

Ah Lily...we'll get more into Lily later.

I've actually been working on toning down Grace's swearing a bit. I've been told it sounds forced and is off-putting a couple of different times. It is supposed to act as another factor in Grace's social ineptitude, especially when she is upset. terrets, just Grace being graceless.

The whole memory charm thing points towards the social ineptitude thing too :). She'll learn...she'll learn.

Oh the bathroom! Remember when Grace had the episode in the Great Hall and went to the infirmary? Well, Grace has this thing against scars, and the House symbols being etched into her body didn't exactly make her happy...hence her freak-out :p. That's also why she went to Albus for some guidance.

Thanks for coming back! I know it's a strong AU, and that certainly is not everybody's thing, but I'm having too much fun playing around with the plot and characters :).


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