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Review:AlexFan says:
Eeek! I love this so much you don't even know! I've found myself yet another story to read up on!

I love how you started off the story by giving background information Victoire. I'm usually not a big fan of that because I feel like I'm getting shoved all of this stuff at me and I don't know what to do with it but it worked this time. It really helped me get to know Victoire and what kind of a person she was probably like.

I could totally relate to her as well. I love traveling so any chance to go some place is great for me! I can understand her desire to want to see the world and experience everything.

As soon as you mentioned Condescending Alex, I knew that he was just going to get on my nerves. From the very first line of dialogue that he had, I already knew that I'd probably wan to push him down a hill and then run away.

I like Silent Sam more than Condescending Alex and he wasn't even speaking for the majority of this chapter! Speaking of which, as much as I am a Teddy/Victoire shipper, I like her with Sam right now (I SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX) but I wouldn't mind if they stayed friends either.

I don't care what the relationship status with Victoire and Silent Sam is, as long as he's here, I'm good.

But yeah, I just really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

Author's Response: Hi! Aw, thank you so much! I haven't had a new review on this story in ages and this review was great in re-igniting my interest in it. :) I'm so glad you liked it!

I know what you mean about not liking long descriptions of background information, but I'm really glad you liked it here. I felt like with a next generation character it's important to establish them as seperate form the stereotypical portrayal of that character and I really loved coming up with Vic's backstory.

I'm happy this story reminded you of your love for traveling and you could relate to her! I love writing about traveling in this story, it's so much fun.

I love how most reviewers on this story have expressed such instant hate for Condescending Alex and that they know someone exactly like that, so I'm really happy I captured one of those awful characters everybody loves to hate! I'm glad you liked Sam better and that you ship them - yay!!! Mission accomplished. Sam does survive into the next chapter at least, I will tell you that. :)

Thanks so much for this awesome review!! It really made my day! :D


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