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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oh my god, this was an awesome second chapter, and I really don't know what else I can say about it apart from that I was reading like a woman possessed and that I was completely wrapped up in this chapter as I read, and didn't even know what was going on around me - and this is quite rare for me when I read fanfiction.

The mystery in this story so far is just amazing, and I am so looking forward to slowly unraveling it. I especially liked the bit with the marauders map and the nameless dot - I'm pretty sure I had shivers up my spine at that point.

And then the fact that Erin's curtains burst into flame for no reason - what on earth is all that about? Does this mystery have something to do with her? Or perhaps Albus and James? I don't know - I guess I'll have to wait and see!

I continue to like how the characters are developing. I especially like how you expanded on Erin and Lily's characters this chapter, and James' comment about Erin meeting with Hermione - they seem similar, yet completely different at the same time!

I am definitely adding this to my favourites!

Courtney:)

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