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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hi!! I'm here from the review tag thread. :D

It took me a few moments to get where/when the story picked back up. It seems like this has gone back to Grace getting into Hogwards. I'm quite fascinated by the idea that Grace is James' twin. I'm quite blown away by the literary genius of having a blind seer. I mean, really - you couldn't get more poetic than that. The words Gretchen says to Grace after the attack are quite haunting...

Ah, so many questions!! How old is Grace when she goes to Hogwarts? She seems older than a 1st year. she's such a mystery and I'm eager to figure her out.

Why is Grace in the hospital wing? Will I find out soon? I love her reaction to James and Sirius being invisible. And, well, I can't blame her for loving Remus. :D

Grace trying to navigate a conversation with James and Sirius his hilarious. Her uncertantity about them knowing if he's a werewolf and their protectiveness is oh so cute. I loved Sirius' comment about having a brother and that doesn't mean he could be trusted. Right, the nicknames don't mean anything... gosh, does James think she's daft?

I don't blame James and Sirius for pulling their wands at a stranger knowing all their secrets. Wow, that had to be a shock.

Ooooh, demon slayer! I like this combination. *cough* remus is special *cough*

Aah, ending things right when she's about to explain stuff is mean and yet fits so well.

Really awesome chapter. I really like how deep and complex you've made this story!


Author's Response: Hey there!

Ah, she's 16. It was pointed out to me that while rewriting the chapter, I did exclude Grace's age. Also, I've added a date to the first scene so that there's a bit of a smoother transition. Hopefully, that will clear some things up. The revisions are in the queue!

Yes, a blind seer is lovely, but unfortunately not original :(. I think Shakespeare got to that first! ...always several steps ahead of me that man.

Why Grace is in the infirmary will be answered in the next chapter...I think. But you wont find out any in-depth information on it until later. And I doubt that will make any sense until you find out what happened. :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed the conversation. I'm still working out James' reaction to her sister as well as his characterization. He's my problem character. I have declared him my mortal enemy of all characters simply because I haven't figured out exactly how to write with him.

Of course Remus is special! :p

I'm sorry! It seemed like a good time to end the chapter!!

Thanks for the review :)! It made my day!


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