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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
I see that you are still involving the war's more physical aftermath as a subplot. Thank you! I had expected that there would be some significant damage done to the castle and I think it is important to fuse some of that into the story. That's especially true given your setting. So...good job!! :) Gold stars! I have the feeling that a less skilled writer might exclude some of this information, making their story less realistic. Not you though :)!

I really am enjoying the development of character relationships. They are believable and any time absolutely anything sweet occurs I emit an audible "aww"!

Snape and Harry's relationship is especially sweet with the idea of guardianship. The line "You canít possibly have thought that you would not be welcomed to join us for meals" was a lovely indicator of both Harry's discomfort and unsureness as well as Severus' concern. I loved it! Uhm, more gold stars!

Also, I'm very intrigued to see where Alexis and Severus' relationship is headed. But, as she will be working at Hogwarts, I expect that I will see more of her soon!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: "I have the feeling that a less skilled writer might exclude some of this information, making their story less realistic." - Hugs...Just hugs...I don't know what else to say! LOL!

You make me happy with such wonderful reviews!


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