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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:

Geez, I certainly hope things get better for her soon, even though you'll have no plot then. Lol maybe not.

I really liked your party scene. It wasn't rushed, and you didn't have too much going on at one time making it hard to understand what all was happening. It flowed very smoothly. Your depiction of the other characters you introduced were nice too! I like how Percy was still well Percy. But you didn't make him over the top. I really like that, because nowadays, everybody makes him out to be some crazy bossy pants, and in the books he was just a bossy pants. Ha, well like I said, it wasn't over the top, and I liked that.
I also like Fleur's character. I still picture her that stuck up girl, and her wanting to do everything = perfect.

That scene with Ginny was seriously bone-chilling. I was seriously freaked. I'm just glad Ron was there to save her!
I do hope she opens up to Harry soon though!

As always, great job on this! I'd love to review again when you have more posted. I'll be waiting to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Hah, you'll have to wait and see!

It's great that you liked the party and enjoyed my portrayal of the other Weasleys. It was fun to imagine how Ginny might feel toward her brothers and how their advice to her as their baby sister might be different. As for Fleur, I thought that maybe Ginny would get along with her but still have some harmless personal differences, as you saw here. I'm glad you liked Fleur's portrayal.

It's great that the ocean scene was scary! She's got some good support around her if she'll just let someone in to help her...

Thanks for your lovely review :)


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