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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:

Holy cow, great cliffhanger! And poor, unsuspecting Harry! Geez!

Okay, good stuff now.
I think that therapy scene you wrote was written really really well. It wasn't cheesy or over analyzed. It was quite perfect actually. I've sat in on some of my sister's therapy sessions, and you've seemed to have nailed it. It seemed pretty realistic to me.

As for the last scene, I think it was awful. Not your writing, what happened! Geez, super creepy. Except, I wouldn't have into the attic, definitely would've made Harry go. Ha

And you have really characterized Harry much until the last paragraph, and I think you did wonderful. Harry is normally a hard person to write, or atleast I think so, because he is what Queen JKR wrote from. So the pressure is definitely on when writing from Harry's view, but, I think you handled him marvelously.

Again, cheers to you, because I literally cannot write anymore because I want to know what happens so bad.:P

Author's Response: Hello again!

I'm actually a therapist in real life, so I would hope the scene came across as realistic :) I did throw in some things to reflect how the experience could be different for a celebrity, like the assumption the therapist made, but I modeled a lot of it after what I've done and seen fellow therapists do in their sessions.

I'm pleased to hear that the last scene was sufficiently creepy and you liked my portrayal of Harry. He's going to kind of be thrown into Ginny's struggles and find that he isn't perfectly equipped to handle them, which may come as a surprise to him. But you'll have to read on further for that :)

Thanks for another sweet review!


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