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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi!

Like I said, back in your Molly Weasley story, I'd definitely come back! It's taken me a while, but I'm here (and will probably camp out for a while, if I don't drown in school work)

So, um, wow.

Seriously. So many feels.

They way you took a canon moment and just showed the light of fear on it. Brilliant. I still can't believe this was only 500 words.

The imagery and scene you painted of the Black house was so stunning, especially since you didn't use a lot of words. The description was perfect, and even though there was only one word of dialogue, it was enough. It was chilling and gave me goosebumps.

Your little bits on Walburga really made me despise her, and her twisted and cruel nature really came through.

A really good piece!

Author's Response: Hi again, thanks for coming back!

It's great to hear that you liked this and felt like it was effectively creepy despite the brevity. The word limit was tough to stick to, I'll admit. I did work a lot into the imagery and I'm pleased that it and the characterization came through well.

Thanks for another lovely review!

-Amanda


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