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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello! I happened across this story on the "Recently Added" page, and it intrigued me.

So I kept reading! :)

I really enjoy the way you've left Maddy's past with her mother such a mystery. It leaves so much be discovered, and I am very curious about it all! Her relationship with Alice is amusing and real--I love how Alice is so blunt about certain things, especially when it comes to boys.

And Elliot... Oh my goodness. He is one of the best male OCs that I've ever read, and one of my favorite characters. It was GREAT when he showed up at Hogwarts, and now that he's trying to get Maddy to talk to him... It's really cute, but not at all cliche. *LOVE!*

All of the characters, thus far, are quite a mysterious bunch. I would love, love, love to see chapter eight out soon, so that I can either a) become demystified, or b) get even more confused and fall even more in love with all of the wonderful characters.

You are AWESOME at character development. Really awesome. I have lots of things in common with Maddy, like loving the rain and being sort of reclusive, and she is probably my favorite of everyone.

Please update quickly, if you can! :)

~UnluckyStar57

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