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Review:Cannons says:

(I'm not always that dramatic)

You know when I said I was saving this and reading a chapter at a time? yeahh..? well I failed.. Read from chapter 11 to 34 since yesterday. I really should catch up on some sleep!

This was so well written, it's unbelievable. The biggest thing about this for me was how well planned it was ( or seemed to be) I think a lot of people would have maybe jumped right in to the plot and ship-y stuff way to early, but I loved how you took your time developing Beth to the reader and the rest of the Marauders, as well as Snape of course. I've really come to like Beth and think she really does fit perfectly in with the Marauders and has officially joined them in my head now. I was reading another Marauders era fic, and I was like 'HEY, where's Beth?' and then I remembered..


Anyways I think I'm going to bombard your MTA with questions now.

this was a seriously amazing story and am so happy that I have two more to go!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the first book so much! It makes me happy to know that you read so much and couldn't put it down, and especially that you found it well-written. It was definitely hard not to have Beth and Severus making out in every chapter, but that's just not who they are!

Also: Beth is totally a canon Marauder. Fact. You won't be able to convince me otherwise. ♥

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