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Review:AlexFan says:
It seems like Lily has found the man that she's been looking for, by the sounds of it anyway. Mr Fitzgerald sounds like a lovely and intelligent person, I'm sure that he and Lily would get along great with each other once they got to know one another.

I thought it was quite funny how all of those men were throwing themselves at Lily and showering her with compliments. It's amazing what a last name and a lot of money can do for you, isn't it? I'm so proud of Lily for not buying into any of the things that they said to her. It shows that she's a proper lady but she's not a foolish lady.

And my goodness, what has gone on between Adela and Mr Fitzgerald to cause such a reaction (I assume something bad). I've got an idea of what might have happened but I don't know if I'm right.

Author's Response: But perhaps he's too perfect for her. :P Though I do want her to be happy - she is so frustrated with her family all the time that she needs someone in the world who actually pleases her.

It's actually a positive scene for Lily because she's disgusted by their behaviour - she is surprisingly aware of the position her family name and legacy awards her, and it's to her benefit that she doesn't buy in to their compliments. She can tell genuine people from the fakes, something Rose would never give her credit for. I'm glad that you liked that aspect of Lily's character. :D

You'll see in the next chapter, haha. Thank you again for reading and reviewing! It's been wonderful to follow you through this story!

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