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Review:youngest death eater says:
Hey!
I just finished reading all the chapters that you have put up so far - this is an amazing story!
I'm sorry I haven't left any reviews on other chapters, but I thought I could make it up by making an extra long one and putting everything into it.
So, like I said, this is an amazing story! I love the plot and I love Naomi!!!
Just as a bit of constructive criticism, you might want to watch how your sentences sound - like just making sure they make sence because I have noticed that sometimes they don't make much sence.
Please don't be offended by that, I just wanted to point it out so you can work on it in chapters to come.
Please please PLEASE update soon! I really love this story and I can't wait to read more!
-Amy

Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you so much for the lovely review!! And don't worry, I'm happy with even just one review :)
Love to hear to enjoy the story!
Also, I am absolutely NOT offended by criticism, I am open to it and I think it is very constructive. Thank you for daring to say what you think.
I try my best to write everything in a way that makes sense to my readers; I will put even more effort into it but, please, bear with me if sometimes I make mistakes - English isn't my first language and it is hard to convey my ideas sometimes, especially when they are complex or I become very excited about them! Haha
Anyway, I will work hard so that there are no mistakes / difficult to understand sentences :)

Thank you!
Lots of love,
Kate


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