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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hi! Doing a review tag!

I really like the window of time you're writing about. that an and of itself makes this story rather interesting.

The boredom and discussion of muggle Halloween is a great conversation between the two. I've never seen Lily portrayed as the one who might have been bored and anxious but I love that you added that to her. It's a great facet of her that I've never seen but feels very genuine. James' observations on trick or treating are great. Perfect wizard interpretation of the tradition. James is quite sweet to Lily. *gush*

LOVE that he compared marrying her to catching the ultimate snitch. Well, even if Lily didn't like the analogy, I liked it. I imagine that being compared to a sport is a bit of a romantic let down.

Oh gosh, Harry calling for Sirius is absolutely heart wrenching. He's right at the perfect age to be able to say a few words. :D

Your description of James' death (as perceived by Lily from the floor above) is terribly sad and petrifying. The line look up all she had left in this world is another heart breaker. :( You bring out the fear and desperation in her final moments with brilliant clarity.

This is really quite incredible - I'm so glad I got a chance to read this.

-Rose

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you liked this! This was the first time I tried writing anything about them two and was pretty nervous about it especially since it was WAY more emotionally charged than other things I have attempted.

Thanks for the great review!


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