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Review:HollyStone73 says:
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I LOVED this!! I love Sirius anyway and this just was so well written with such vivid descriptions! I could almost see the horrible scene of all of the ones he loved dead on the the floor before him.

And such a perfect little ending. Pointing out how his mother would notice the drawer opened before noticing that he was gone seemed so very typical of what I would expect from what I know of his mother. And her refusal to give it away simply because it was an heirloom...awesome!

All in all a perfectly (cute?) but creepy little story! I loved it!!

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you liked the descriptions and felt like the death scene was effective.

I actually think the ending is one of the creepiest parts, because his mother is so nonchalant about the whole thing and yet you have this sense that she knows the desk is not something to be messed with. I'm glad you liked the "heirloom" line, too--I wanted to show that she truly values her inheritance more than her oldest son.

Thanks for your very kind review!

-Amanda


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