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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hi there :)

I Love Scorose and teen pregnancy stories (I'm weird :p) so this is a perfect match!

I really like the beginning, mainly because it's different as to how stories start and it's original. I like that Rose says 'again' because this proves it isn't just a one night thing and they've done it together before, so it's not the usual 'boy and girl meet at party, get drunk and the consequence is she's then pregnant' It's nice and original.

Haha, love that Al is the one to wake up and catch them in bed together. Certainly never seen that before so yay you for even more originality!!! (Especially as Scorose pregnancies are cliched).

I LOVE your take on Rose, she is literally perfect! I mean she has some faults like sleeping with her best friends cousin and drinking, but I mean doesn't everyone. (Have faults that is, not sleeping with best friends cousins :p) I love that even though she has a wild party side she still feel the need to uphold her reputation/family name without being made the gossip pf the school.

Apart from one teeny tiny thing I wouldn't have guessed you were American at all! When Rose is dressing she says her dress looks like a shirt, but to me a shirt is something men wear with a tie at formal events such as weddings or to work. It would either be t-shirt or a top.

Good start!! Off to read the next chapter :)

-Potterfan310

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate your review. And thanks for the tip on wording! I really appreciate it, as it's pretty hard to be British when you're American!!

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