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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hello sweetie :)

I feel so bad for Scorp thinking that Rose is having Freddie's baby. I just wanna scream it at him that it's his :p

Haha, James is still one of my favourites. He is brilliant and I love him for it!

I'm glad Rose is seeing some sense in that she can't stay with Freddie and let Scorp forever think it's Freddie's baby.

Okay so Freddie is sweet in a way, I mean he is essentially offering to be a father to Rose's baby just because he loves her. But having to make her choose him or Scorpius, that's sort of mean.

FINALLY! ROSE ADMITS HER FEELINGS FOR SCORP! *Happy dance* I'm so, so glad and even more glad that Scorpius overheard her, maybe he'll start to realise the baby isn't Freddie's.

I hate being picky and I sorry for mentioning it like fifty thousand times but the numbers thing again. - "she wore 2 inch heels, not that she needed them at her height of five foot 10." And there were a couple of tense changes towards the end of the chapter.

Aww it's so nice to see Rose with her parents, especially Hermione.

I can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully Rose is telling Rom and Hermione soon!

10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph :D

Author's Response: Well hello there!

It is nice to see Rose trying to muddle her way out of it, but she certainly has some obstacles. Freddie is a nice character to play because he is a victim of sorts - he wants to be with Rose but he doesn't want to be hurt again. Difficult path to take!

Never apologise for picking me up on things - you're still my favourite reviewer :P

Glad you liked, hope to hear your thoughts on the next chapter! :)

-Sarita x


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