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Review:APerkins says:
Oh wow. I loose myself in this story a little bit more each time!
I enjoyed hearing how lupins back story played out. I can really see fenrir going the revenge angle.

Dumbledore is such a difficult character to do, I really enjoyed ur version of him, it sounded so realistic.

You do dialogue between characters really well. Have I mentioned that before?

I think too that the idea of an Everto trucido being in love and severus being too pure for her was brilliant.
Looking forward to seeing that angle develop.
Loved the fact that grace just assumed a memory charm would be ok.

Was intrigued by the bit where albus taught her though.
Why? H9w?

Anyway I'm sure all will be revealed in the upcoming chapters. You've already revealed some past ones that I really really appreciate!

Please please in this au make severus alive n falling in love!

Anyway, really enjoying this, well done! thank you

Author's Response: Hey there!

I'm glad you are beginning to find an interest in this story :). I know the first couple chapters are rough. I've had to drag a few people through them to get to the fun parts, but that is why they are under reconstruction!

I never actually thought twice about Albus' characterization, he just kind of developed as the story flowed along. So I'm glad you liked him :). The only character who has really given me a hard time is James Potter...he has proven to be the bane of my existence :p.

Aw, I'm glad you like the dialogue! Actually, that was one of my concerns in this story. I wasn't sure if the dialogue was working, so I'm glad you liked it.

There will be some development in the Grace/Severus thing, though it's hard to write a romance when one of those characters is in love with a certain Lily Evans! :( I'm working on the details :).

Oh yes, answers will come. You know I like leaving people in the dark :).

Thanks for reviewing!

-Rumpel


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