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Review:Cannons says:
Hey, I'm still doing that review every story of yours thing and I saw that you had won third place in this so I had to come and read!

YEAH, it was scary. You made it so realistic especially how he was paralysed with fear and didn't remember he could make light at will.

There were lots of great lines in here, I particularly liked -

I was drowning in my own fear, the weight of the darkness pressing heavily on me until I was sure I would be crushed by it. - that's so realistic, I can imagine how scary that would be if you were scared of the dark.

It was a great idea to make his nightmares come true, although I don't want him to die!

A nice one shot, you deserved third place!

:)

Cannons

Author's Response: Awww thank you :D I really hope that you enjoy my stories :D

Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm glad that you found it scary, I wanted to try and get his fear across so I'm glad that I achieved that.

I don't want him to die either ;( It broke my heart to write this story!

Thank you so much!!! :D


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