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Review:800 words of heaven says:
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This was... very amusing! I found myself laughing and smiling all the way through. It actually reminded me a lot of the prequel that JK Rowling wrote a few years ago for World Book Day, where we get to see the wizarding world from muggle eyes.

I actually adored Neville here. It was a lot like Neville... but not at the same time. It's difficult to explain, but whatever he was, he was adorable and I loved reading about him and his adventures with Luna!

I must commend Rick for putting up with a "nutter" for as long as he did! That takes some fortitude. Whilst the miscommunications due to magic were amusing, the culture clashes took the biscuit!

I really enjoyed this! Awesome stuff!

Author's Response: Hi, there!

I'm not familiar with the prequel you mentioned, but now I want to look it up. Sounds interesting.

For some reason, I always think of Neville as being kind of overwhelmed when I think about Luna. I do think the two of them would have made a good couple, at least for a while. Then something like this probably would have happened.

Rick was loosely based on several of my uncles. He finds Neville interesting for a while, then it just gets out of his control.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.


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