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Review:Cannons says:
hey, review tag.

I'm back again with hopefully more 'meat' this time. I do feel a slight sense of de ja vu though.

Anyway as I said before I really did enjoy this little one shot and it is very different from anything I have read before.

I enjoyed reading your disclaimer at the beginning although it was much funnier reading it the second time around after finishing reading.

It was funny reading a crazy Neville but unnerving at the same time. Luna has turned very demanding in this but its so funny when reading and then realizing it was Luna.

I liked the way you had Neville explaining things to Rick as if he was a wizard as it made for some great lines, although I am still a little confused as to why Neville is acting SO oddly that he would talk to a muggle like that, especially after the war, but it was for a challenge I think you said so I guess that explains it.

Anyway, as I said, it was a funny, enjoyable, bizarre read.

Cannons

Author's Response: Hi, there.

This was my story for the House Cup, so it was definitely different from the type of thing I normally write. It was fun, though, and definitely low-stress.

Overwhelmed Neville and Libertine Luna are characters that have danced in the back of my head for a long time. It was fun to get to do something with them. Rick is a character loosely based on several of my uncles.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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