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Review:AlexFan says:
Ah yay! I got so excited when I saw that there was a new chapter for this story because I got to read about a version of Albus that I could really relate to.

But seriously, halfway through this, I realised that Albus and I very similar people and that the reason why I probably like him so much and why he's become one of my favourite people is because I can relate to him:

He's just so calm and rational but at th same time, he's weird. He's weird in a quiet way I guess is what I'm saying.

Scorpius is so different from Albus but at the same time I can see the two of them being good friends. Their personalities just seem like they would fit together really well.

There were a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing major or anything. But anyway, I'm so glad that you're back with another chapter for this story!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, calm and weird. That's me, as well. Maybe a little less weird than Al, but we're similar. I think I put myself into all of my main characters, more or less. So that means you and I are similar, too. :D
Scorpius is just so fun to write! I love his type of personality and wish I was a bit more like him, but alas... I do have friends that remind me of him, so yeah, Scorpius and Al should get along just fine. :)
I know I have some grammar mistakes and I promise I'll fix it some time soon. I have an examine coming up, but after that I'll have more time to fix everything. :)
I may post another chapter even before that, though. So stay tuned for more of the story. ;)


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