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Review:Cannons says:
hey bella!

Sorry for the wait!

Anyway after the dramatic end to the last chapter this was an intriguing little twist, one that I didn't see coming. In fact who am I kidding. That was a big twist and I TOTALLY didn't see it coming.

The shadow figure...interesting...sounds like a likeable enough character ;) I find it quite funny that you have put Yaxley in charge, after Voldemort, it does seem funny but you have made him quite scary even if she does thinks he's stupid.

This was my favourite chapter so far by a long way. I really loved the whole, Draco-isn't-doing-it-for-an-ulterior-motive, you have me completely sold on the fact that he's on the right side for once.

Also the way you described the manor was really chilling, it reminded me of the Riddle house a lot to be honest.

You really know how to write and your chapters flow so naturally and you give the reader the impression that you know exactly where you are going with this. I don't know how much you've planned out but it seems like loads so far.

Is Draco going to team up with her totally now? or is he going to go back to his house without her? what's the holy grail thingy they keep talking about? so many Q's!

Lovely chapter, my favourite so far :)

Cannons

Author's Response: Hi there!

Well, I'm glad you weren't expecting the plot twist because then that means it's even more of a plot twist than I planned!

Also, I don't quite think I'm done with the shadow figure just yet, so he may make some guest appearances here or there :o

Plus, I decided that I would give Draco a little break from always being the bad guy, poor boy always gets the sharp end of the stick. But that doesn't mean it will always be like that! Muahah * evil smirk *

Well, thank you so much for such a lovely review and I do hope you keep reading!


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