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Review:Lady Asphodel says:
Hey, it's Alishya from the review thread. :)

You really have an interesting start to the story - making a deal with Death and the deceased returned to life.

I'm getting feels of reading Sirius, Remus, Severus, and Tonks (because they're my favorite characters) again.

I do enjoy the way how you described the atmosphere of the chapter. It feels like reading HP books again. (n.n)

I know you were trying to leave us on a cliff hanger - which worked, but I feel like this chapter could have been longer, but this was still good. ^_^

Anyways, keep up the great work! :D


- Asphodel

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad you found the beginning interesting. The very first version of this chapter, many rewrites ago, was over 3k but was absolutely confusing. It is still under some reconstruction, but I ended up cutting the word count severely.

Ah, yes, I missed some of these characters too! For my first fanfiction, I couldn't help but bring them back!

Thanks again!
-Rumpel


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