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Review:academica says:
Rachel ♥

First off, you do you. Totally not bothered by a sporadic update schedule. It's easier for me to manage keeping up with the story that way, and your chapters are always worth a bit of a wait!

Okay, three cheers for actually making Scorpius kind of a jerk! Don't get me wrong, the idea of the next gen kids transcending the artificial social and political boundaries established by their parents warms my heart and all, but I get kind of tired of reading story after story where Scorpius is cool with Albus and they're best friends or whatever. I like seeing some of Draco's pettiness bleed over into the next generation, because it suggests that he didn't totally reform his ways after the war -- which, considering his massive ego, seems somewhat realistic to me. It also seems realistic for a little murder and mystery to not be the only thing plaguing a pair of schoolboys. Nice job.


Okay, jokes and eloquently praised exclamations aside, I really like the fact that you dipped into James's psyche a bit more toward the end of this chapter. It's curious to see him feeling so alienated and angsty -- a bit different from the norm, in a very pleasant way. Again, it feels realistic to me for him to be a bit tired of the fame and curiosity that accompanies being a Potter in the post-war era, and it made me sad to see him feel guilt over possibly exposing Albus and Lily to the same fate. I get the sense that something much more than a dance or a bully or even the mystery in the castle is weighing on him, and yet he can't seem to evade those lesser responsibilities either. I hope he can find a way to trust those around him and relax a little, but somehow I think my hopes are going to be dashed.

Anywho, great job as always! I love this story!


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