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Review:Cannons says:
Hey here with your requested review!

This was a really interesting chapter. After the last one I had written her brother of as a bit of a mug, and tbh I haven't changed my mind! Anaxandra didn't deserve that :o

He really put her down with the speech about her mediocrity and how she got her parents killed. Also I didn't remember she had a little sibling so I must have forgotten but that was an interesting development.

I feel as if this is going to start a significant change in of direction in the story now that there is the different dimension of her family still being alive, or some of them.

He said to her that she only learnt to take one animal form, I'm presuming that he is talking about being an animagus, so does that mean he can change in to more then one? I didn't know that was possible.

As always another intriguing chapter and you really finish it with drawing them in to read the next one, so well done.

Cannons

Author's Response: Haha, yeah Anders was a bit of a jerk, but just like Ana was at the beginning, he doesn't really know how to handle his feelings after something major like losing his family. The only thing he can do is lash out at Ana because she was with them.

It was in the prologue that she had a little sister, and then in the chapter where she had the nightmare she heard her brother scream :P But I don't expect you to remember that 100% as they were kind of slight details I slipped in.

Ah. The animal forms. This question will be answered later, but I can tell you it's not really the same thing, but is at the same time. Haha, I know, cryptic.

And thank you for reviewing :)

--Monica


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