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Review:800 words of heaven says:
Hello! I promised that I would drop in to review when this was up, so here I am :D

I actually also dropped in because I'm a HUGE Jily fan, but I don't really have the time to read longer stories, but I try to catch all the new one-shots!

This was absolutely adorable! I liked how they got together in such a quiet way. It wasn't like a huge deal (except for them) in front of a giant crowd or anything. Just some terrible tea and biscuits!

Your James is absolutely adorable! I loved how he was so bad at cooking. I don't pretend to be any sort of cooking virtuoso, but even I can't stuff up tea. It was very sweet of Lily to attempt to drink it anyway.

I actually really liked the way you wrote Lily here, as well. She was quiet and reserved, and I liked how she let James of gently, yet spoke her mind. Also, it was very sweet when she realised she was willing to give James a go!

Wonderful story! I'd be interested to read on if you ever thought about expanding this - or writing another Marauders story :)

Author's Response: Hello!:) Thanks for your awesome review! I really like Jily too and since I've never wrote any before, I wanted to try. I'm glad you think the characterization of both of them is accurate:) I'm actually writing a Mauraders novel for NaNo so I'll probably start posting it in December. Thanks again for reviewing this for me, and I'll have yours up soon!

-LumosWeasley


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