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Review:Sonder says:
As much as I love this story. I cant help but notice a huge time discrepancy. First off it says that Sirius comes back after 10 years. Seeing as he died in the 5th book that would make Hermionie 15 at the time and 25 in present story line. However seeing that a picture of Harry as a 23 year old surfaced and Juliette being 6 would imply that Hermione is at least 29. Also in the chapter when Sirius is contemplating his thoughts it is mentioned that Hermionie and Draco have been involved for over a decade. And in earlier chapters it was written that Draco was there for Hermione when Harry and Ron died. So by that line of thinking she would have to be at least 33 years old, in turn making Juliette much older than 6 years. This realization took me out of the story a bit. Id like to hear your thoughts on that. Either way Im loving the direction you have been taking in regards to who survived and didnt also the relationships both past and present. Keep writing, its great stuff!

P.S In your mind how old is Sirius while all this is taking place? Obviously taking into account he didnt age the 10 years he was gone.

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